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The Best I Can Do

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September 23, 2012
The Best I Can Do by *mellowghost
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When you both started that conversation,
The one that would end 2 years of your life,
You couldn't have known what was coming;
But you took it like a pro.  Bye bye, wife.
Slow, rational, mourning followed by action,
You stood strong and fearless to show your integrity.
What you couldn't see on the other side of that phone,
Her eyes shone a red, white, and blue so pretty;
And she was looking anywhere but at you boy.

She quit you like school, never going back.
Can't you let her go; chop chop her out?
Of course not, your eyes sparkled like that diamond.
Even though history fills you with doubt,
Suffer righteously, leave her alone, and move on.
Her star spangled banner will rip and fade.
Though it seemed; it was not meant to be.
Consider yourself eternally saved
From the girl who wanted freedom more than you.
I wrote this poem for the prompt contest over at :icontalentedwritersguild:

This poem is to/about one of my dear friends who just broke up with his fiancé. My heart breaks for him, but there's nothing I can do. He really doesn't want to talk to me about it, nor does he seem to want to talk to me at all really. So since I don't know what to do, the best I can really do is break the situation down objectively.
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Laeneris's avatar
Oh wow, that was amazing. This poem really knocked me off my feet! I was thinking of how this should be a DD, but I see I don't need to suggest it! Ha! :dummy:

Poetry is definitely my weakest point (both writing and interpreting), so to see someone write a wonderful work like this... well, let's say there's a lot for me to learn. :nod:

p.s. Hope things turned out alright with your friend.